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Monday 11 April 2016

Fiafia

Up on the expensive stage I felt the shiny light on the bright  black stage. The Tongan princesses were amazing.  I was proud of me because it was fun.

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  1. I was very proud of you too Senitila and I really like the story you have created and published today. You have used some great description and your full stops and capital letters are in the right place. Your next step is to use other punctuation such as a comma in your writing. Listen to audio

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